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Old 02-09-2011, 02:35 PM   #154
X JBM X
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Join Date: May 2008
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Location: Hoboken, NJ
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Originally Posted by Mike Wevrick View Post
Your cover letter has too many buzzwords and doesn't tell me anything about what you actually do.

Ack! No apostrophe when pluralizing
Fixed the apostrophe, and added some project experience examples.

Thanks for the feedback!
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