Too many pull focus shots. Try mixing them in every so often, so it doesn't look like thats the only shot you know how to do
I Really did enjoy the part when the beat dropped and the car took off
What did you shoot it with (DSLR?)
Take a look at this video, not saying I'm a professional but I've worked my way through simliar issues that you might have experienced when first starting out and all I can say is keep shooting and have fun, you WILL get better!