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Old 07-19-2005, 03:38 PM   #1
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Smile OT: Please Critique my resume

Critique, prease, if j00 are bored or want somethin' to do

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Dokt4r B. DRum
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Byron Center, MI, 49315
Phone: (800) EAT-CRPT
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OBJECTIVE
Seeking Quality Engineering position where my quality assurance experience in FDA compliant pharmaceutical and biologics manufacturing facilities can be utilized to improve product quality, operations, and company profits.

QUALIFICATIONS SUMMARY
- Knowledge of quality systems, sterile manufacturing facilities, cGMPs, Part 211 and 11 FDA regulations
- Participated and assisted in two FDA Inspections/Quality Audits
- Experience in manufacturing, process validation, new project management, critical utilities (WFI, Class 100, laminar air) and cleaning validation in pharmaceutical and biologics (vaccine) manufacturing environments
- Sterility assurance including lethality and biological indicator testing
- Excellent teamwork, leadership, manufacturing, communication (written, oral and presentation) and computer skills (MS Office, MS Project, Kaye Validator and CAD)

EXPERIENCE
2/2002 – Present.....A vaccine makin’ place......Lansing, MI
Validation and Quality Assurance Engineer......2/2002 – Present

- Execute qualification studies on: autoclaves, sterilization systems, bulk production and storage vessels, controlled temperature units (including product shipping and transportation systems, refrigeration units, cryo freezers and CO2 incubators), laminar air flow environments, classified air zones, laboratory equipment.
- Write documentation for validation, installation/operation/performance/process qualifications (IQ, OQ, PQ, PV), standard operating procedures (SOP), failure investigation, corrective action, risk analysis, scope, specification and training.
- Performed many deviation identifications, failure investigations (FMEA), root cause analyses and corrective action applications on equipment and processes.
- Aseptic handling, processing, production and sterility assurance (lethality and biological indicator) experience
- Process and equipment design, development, commissioning, troubleshooting and continuous improvement.

5/1998 - 10/2001......A big pharmaceutical company......Kalamazoo, Mi
Process and Validation Engineer......3/2001 - 10/2001

- Projects included pharmaceutical clean rooms, full-scale and pilot-plant scale production equipment.
- Developed full-scale pharmaceutical productions facilities including utility testing, process development and productions equipment support with team of engineers and technicians.
- Wrote and edited Process and Instrumentation Diagrams (P&IDs), Process Flow Diagrams (PFDs) and other process diagrams for full, pilot plant and lab scale projects
- Planned project stages and details to a time schedule and coordinated team to maintain established schedule

Process and Project Engineer.......4/1998 - 2/2001
- Led and completed process and manufacturing improvement initiatives for profit, cost and time benefits.
- Developed plant-wide energy savings project utilizing several waste management techniques. Improved efficiency and cost savings by monitoring, tuning and scheduling equipment and plant processes.
- Arranged, prepared and led meetings regarding process and production improvement
- Established and led training program for production-scale operations with instruction manual
- Created and implemented preventative maintenance and validation program for site-wide transfer methods.

EDUCATION
QA Training Courses – pharmaceutical water, risk-based validation, equipment, cleaning, computer/automation
BSE (Chemical Engineering Major, Chemistry Minor) – 5/2001, Calvin College

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Old 07-19-2005, 03:40 PM   #2
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you might consider a new phone number and/or e-mail address.
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:42 PM   #3
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I might consider removing the objectives portion. Sometimes that short section will make or break you, and that is all up to the person doing the initial screening of the resume.
Other than that it looks great to me.
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:42 PM   #4
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:45 PM   #5
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boobielover????? well...um...ok....lol...you should keep that, instead of whatever was there.
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:46 PM   #6
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:48 PM   #7
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Do you know how to make ecstasy? cocaine?

edit: I was in Chemical Engineering for a couple years, and my classmate gave me some "stuff" he made to mix it in a drink. Said it was like GHB.. I was like, "alright cool, thanks," then promptly threw it in the garbage...
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:53 PM   #8
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ever consider doing large scale autoclaves? i'm working on the hard-to-damage Boeing 787 and they're going to need some ginormous autoclaves to cure whole fuselage sections. just a thought. aerospace work pays well....
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:56 PM   #9
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Old 07-19-2005, 03:59 PM   #10
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Looks good. Too bad you weren't in MA as I'm hiring and you would fit perfectly. I can't find anyone here with GMP or GLP knowledge as everyone's academic or too biotech biased.
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Old 07-19-2005, 04:01 PM   #11
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why were you not working for four months and these two items might lead to some confusion because of the no companies on the second

Process and Validation Engineer......3/2001 - 10/2001
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Process and Project Engineer.......4/1998 - 2/2001
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Old 07-19-2005, 04:05 PM   #12
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why were you not working for four months and these two items might lead to some confusion because of the no companies on the second

Process and Validation Engineer......3/2001 - 10/2001
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Process and Project Engineer.......4/1998 - 2/2001
Unemployed Phizer layoffs
Being honest, but the truph hurts...its a nasty little bruise on the resume :|

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Old 07-19-2005, 04:06 PM   #13
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Thanks to both of you for the ideas...but MrsDRum and I are trying to stay in West Mich.

I drive over an hour each way to the current job...I just want to find something in Grand Rapids (where I live)

Max Power...I'll keep you in mind, as I'm surrounded with QA engineers with my kind of experience. If I "learn" that any of them are looking, I'll point them your way

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Old 07-20-2005, 02:20 PM   #14
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My best friend last night said that some places don't like the objective thingy...
This was news to me....anyone else heard of this?

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Old 07-20-2005, 02:23 PM   #15
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My best friend last night said that some places don't like the objective thingy...
This was news to me....anyone else heard of this?

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read post #3...
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Old 07-20-2005, 02:24 PM   #16
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My best friend last night said that some places don't like the objective thingy...
This was news to me....anyone else heard of this?

DRum
Hmm..haven't heard that one before. "Objective" goes well with a science resume.

edit: after re-reading it, it seems a bit wordy. Why not just, "Seeking a challenging position in <whatever position/ industry>" and let your qualifications do the talking.
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Old 07-20-2005, 02:25 PM   #17
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hmm..somewhere on your resume, you should add:

"MI Fellatio Champion 2001-2004 (just ask for a demonstration)"

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Old 07-20-2005, 02:28 PM   #18
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I think you should say "quality" a few more times in the objective.

Never underestimate the power of a well written objectives section. I'm had to read >500 resumes in the past month, and it irks me when that section is poorly written, one sentence long, or god forbid, absent completely.

The best resumes I come across treat it like a mini cover letter.
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Old 07-20-2005, 02:30 PM   #19
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Being honest, but the truph hurts...its a nasty little bruise on the resume :|

DRum

I work in the pharmaceutical arena and a fourth month non-working period is not a bruise. Its all too common and most people wouldnt think it reflects your work. In fact 4 months is a pretty quick turn-around I think.

I like the objective.

I would shorten up the description of the job at Kalamazoo. It looks like you had two different positions there, but that sections is definitely too lengthy.
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.... I'm had to read >500 resumes in the past month, and it irks me when that section is poorly written, one sentence long, or god forbid, absent completely....
the ironing is delicious.
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Old 07-20-2005, 02:49 PM   #21
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"Well Dokt4r B. DRum we've read over your resume and test scores and well..."



























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Old 07-20-2005, 02:54 PM   #22
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Hey, you work at the Anthrax place in Lansing, huh? Lansing blows donkey nuts, doesn't it.
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Old 07-20-2005, 03:00 PM   #23
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<CandyO> Did somebody say there's an ironing position?</CandyO>
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Old 07-20-2005, 03:16 PM   #25
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don't specify your job dates in months, just use the years.

makes the resume easier to read, more professional looking, and doesn't reveal lapses of unemployment

also, makes you look more experienced. (e.g, Do you think in 10 years, anyone will care if you started your job in Februrary or April?)
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